Just an ordinary day

Just an ordinary day, an unwanted visitor came to play. I put it in health. Why?

 

Just an ordinary day
turned my sky grey
when the unwanted visitor
walked your way.

 

I ran far away,
And pretended while I played.
Sunny turned muggy,
And it stayed that way.

 

It rained and it poured.
I thought myself in
The eye of the storm.
Nevermore...

 

You tell me it's ok.
I shouldn't worry anyway.
Why should I care?
Life isn't fair.

 

I shouldn't worry anyway.
Everyone feels this way.
Still, everyday
I sit, and I pray.

 

 

Reviews

[JA!DEN*FROST]

This was a heart warming piece. I really enjoied it. :} The rhyming scheme was hectic, but rather compelling. Where it seemed as if you were losing momentum, the next line brought it right back together. Great work. This reminded me of when I was younger and the days seem to last forever, and the weather was the basis of my happiness. Thank you for posting this. :}

[BenightedWhispers]

I appreciate your feedback. I don't usually rhyme so I'm guessing that's why it was hectic. Ha-ha.

[razormuse]

this is different, but still i like something about it. i try to read the meaning into it, but i really couldn't put my finger on it. a good write though.

[BenightedWhispers]

I wrote this about how I first felt when I was told my dad had cancer. The stranger is cancer.