Good Bye

You put me through every experience

You made me strong, you made me weak,

You made me fall for you, you made me regret it later!

You brought smile on my face in the day, you made me cry to my bed,

You made me feel at the top of the world, you treated me worst than a doormat!

You made me proud that I've made a best choice, you made me feel I deserve much better!

 

At the end you left me with no options..

Neither I had a shoulder to rest on nor any ears to hear my twinge,

But my night pillow and my passive dairy,

When you bid me Goodbye!

 

Reviews

[kharte]

I really liked this poem. Honestly though, I can't understand what's up w the second part...unless, it's kinda like an inside personal shout out to whomever this was written for or just a personal dig. I don't mean that as a bad thing because I do it A LOT. Anyways it packs a punch! Good job!

[Deepika]

Thanks a lot buddy :)

[Saravanan Evu]

Nice Writing ...
[ "you treated me worst than a doormat!" ] Touching Line.

[Deepika]

Thank you Saravanan:)

[Maryem Sumyta]

This is just too good...really means a lot at this moment for me and i totally agree with all those word...:)

[Deepika]

Thank you so much Maryem..good to know that you could relate :)

[Maryem Sumyta]

In fact i related it really well deepika.... you know there's something called " Perfect Timings" !!

[Roshan Nair]

I really liked how you brought out the dichotomy of relationships here, the two seemingly uncompromising ends of reason..all in the same lines, that fluidity, brilliant. Great write again :) cheers

[Deepika]

Thank you so much Roshan :) You always highlight the good aspects of my writings and that's highly encouraging :)

[Surya pradha]

nice portrayal of contrasting emotions. short yet satisfying to read.

[Deepika]

thank you :)

[M.A.Rathore]

This is really a nice poem of self deep expression..I enjoy it very much...
Keep writing
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[Deepika]

Thank you :)

[M.A.Rathore]

Welcome always