Desires

 

Trapped in the blobs of the body's scarlet-

Our “Urges” cross the boundaries of all planets!

Luring as the dreams of the silent night,

Demanding diligence that doesn't always work right!

Plotting secretly, leaving the mood at plight,

Not sure if they could be ever witnessed by the sight..

 

Delightful fare forbidden on the daily diet,

As the mind is conscious of the escalating weight!

Unruly eyes giving birth to the desire-sprout,

Cut 'em off as you've a budget that's way too tight!

Charming girl that looks alluring and bright,

Concealing ego that says time is not just right!

 

Someday your weight doesn't really fright,

But you might have no teeth that was once white!

Someday the money would not be a matter of constraint,

But the thing you desired for, could be out of date!

Someday you'd find yourself as Mr.Perfect,

But You'd be left in a state of a snapped kite!

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Riddhi]

Great work...I really liked the poem...and it seemed very meaningful to me...it just appealed to my soul...each and every word indeed touched my heart...It is true that our desires are really unlimited at least mine...dreams are indeed those which we can see only in sleep!!!!
A very beautiful poem at least for me as i can attach myself to this and have derived a moral from this...
Keep on writing and thanks for sharing...
Riddhi

[M P Ramesh]

Deepika,
When writing takes a course of busy schedule, the writers are at liberty to choose the directions and even outcomes. In a deep breath, all that seem to be of images may turn to be the writing itself.It is really difficult what and where is poetry hides as in the above work.

Carry on...........

M P Ramesh

[CA Anurag Sharma]

Brilliant write Deepika but somehow feel that it needs little bit of editing... seems to be a rough draft of what can be an amazing poem.....was looking forward to your write ups....good work....