Do you feel the same?

Do you feel the same?

A Poem by Whispering Crow

Do you feel the same?
I wonder how I came to live,
Feeling the blood rush in my veins.

Do you feel the same?
I marvel how it is I who sees with my eyes,
And I see all that I can gain.

Do you feel the same?
I am baffled by how we evolve,
We build and everything we try to tame.
I sometimes stop and wonder,
All those things we don't think about,
Like running, smiling, and slumber,
How do we know it's real?

Do you feel the same?

© 2017 Whispering Crow


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Whispering Crow
Do you feel the same?

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Yes, I always think of human evolution. It's amazing simply constructed words remind you of what you thinking.

Great poem, I liked.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Whispering Crow

6 Years Ago

Lol. Yeah, but I am a really impatient person. I am itching to get my school schedule for next schoo.. read more
Jobira

6 Years Ago

Well, no matter how far you can reach, impatience will never change the outcome.
Whispering Crow

6 Years Ago

Yeah.. I can't help it though!

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