VOID

VOID

A Poem by Betty

Neither is it the suffering, nor the hardship this field of battle beholds,
Neither is it the sun, whose frown pity’s no earthly flesh,
That makes me crave for that day, that night death calls;
But it’s when the heart beat of truth I hear marching close,
It’s when I see my blood dripping for all that is void
I think that a breathless flesh would be much enjoyed.


© 2013 Betty



Author's Note

Betty
i have posted a video of this poem here and i would much appreciate if you guys could check it out.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sLG6La1TjsI

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Life is both a form & formless reality. Death in form can indeed seem a respite from tormented life in form. Fortunately formless Life permeates all, transcends all. I offer that musing to spatially ease your eloquent delineation of the way of all flesh.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Betty

4 Years Ago

Pax thank you so much for the comment.. I am ever so grateful.
Betty



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Life is both a form & formless reality. Death in form can indeed seem a respite from tormented life in form. Fortunately formless Life permeates all, transcends all. I offer that musing to spatially ease your eloquent delineation of the way of all flesh.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Betty

4 Years Ago

Pax thank you so much for the comment.. I am ever so grateful.
Betty
Very deep I like it a lot

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Betty

4 Years Ago

Thank you Joe.
Hi Betty - Thats a great reading of VOID on YT -
Personally I would have kept the background music slightly lower and perhaps tinker around with some free sound editing software to fade the music in at the start and out and the end to improve the listeners experience. The poems themselves are read clearly and with perfect confidence.
Well done
X

Posted 4 Years Ago


Betty

4 Years Ago

Anto thank you so much for the kind comment and the advise... I am just so glad you watched the vide.. read more
ANTO

4 Years Ago

Certainly
X
A nice poem indeed,,,Thank you or sharing...:)

Posted 4 Years Ago


Betty

4 Years Ago

Thank you Sami
Sami Khalil

4 Years Ago

My pleasure...:)
i like that..."a breathless flesh"

wonderful imagery there.

yes, sometimes we just wish to check out....we get tired of it all.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Betty

4 Years Ago

Thank you so much Jacob. I really am glad you enjoyed it :)

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Betty

addis ababa, Bole sub City, Ethiopia



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