Silent Mystery

Silent Mystery

A Poem by Tania

There is a rare thought  that consumes me...

Will I always be this person ? 
This lost soul, 
trying to coagulate my tears 
resisting from feeling insignificant , 
tiny.

When you close your eyes ,
don't you experience an infinite state ? 
It is you and your thoughts meeting in darkness , 
gazing at all the moments you have lived in.
 It is in that time , 
in that specific second
in which you wonder 
if your life could be different.

This desire to reach the stars ,
to converse with the worlds most alluring eyes 
and die for a moment within the warmth of joy.
A sense that  confiscates your rigidity 
and makes you lose yourself in darkness.
Fading away , 
miraculously touching  your own world , 
grasping the dots that complete you.
Define you , 
Understand you.

I want that taste of freedom .
I want to be wrapped by joy and die within in its arms.
Death never seemed more beautiful.
Why wouldn't it be ? 
It is the end of a new mystery.
A silent ,
 mesmerizing world. 

Here I am ,
Insignificant.
Tiny.
Unknown.
 
Losing my mind in this vast universe,
word by word 
tune by tune 
dot by dot 
 somersaulting  in my head, 
until I seize its reality
and find myself existing.
Breathing words of awe.

And,
I know. 
I know,
that when I finally meet my star 
I will fall in love,
and die within the silence of  yet another mystery.












                      


© 2016 Tania



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Great poem on self realization, Tania. I much like the thought and imagination to realize yourself. It is true that after closing our eyes, we see only what we have achieved in our past life and what we have to achieve in future. You mentioned a philosophical thought mentioned and experienced by Gautam Budhha that is also called the meditation. We realize such experience when we are in that state. I think all we should realize before going bed. It is called "muhasibah" in Islamic tradition. Besides your thought, what i like much is your choice of simple words to composed this poem. Thanks for sharing, Tania. Keep writing.

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Szhzia

Posted 1 Year Ago


yes, stars sometimes align....and when they do, life becomes blissful.

We should just have better timing than Halley's comet...:P

Great writing.....

Posted 1 Year Ago


Tania

1 Year Ago

Thank You SleeplessVolcano :) Much appreciated .
The universe does make ya feel small doesn't it?

This was an eloquent take on a familiar subject and feeling.

Well done!

Posted 1 Year Ago


Tania

1 Year Ago

Thank you . I am glad you enjoyed it :)
This would make a great spoken word art piece! I would love if you shared on our poetry radio show World Poetry Open Mic. Our next show is at 5am 23/04/2016 your time. You can use Skype ID worldpoetryopenmic to share your work. To listen tune into www.worldpoetryopenmic.net

Posted 1 Year Ago


Tania

1 Year Ago

Hello , that sounds great !
Thanks for the recommendation :)
Loved it and for our sake let's hope you stay the person depicted here because only they could write this! :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


Tania

1 Year Ago

Thank-you , I am glad you liked it ...:)
great write Are we not just dots in the universe. A lovely poem to ponder and reflect on. Deep!:)

Posted 1 Year Ago


Tania

1 Year Ago

Thanks :).......:)
This is an awesome piece :) Good work!

Posted 1 Year Ago


Tania

1 Year Ago

Thank-you!:))
I want that taste of freedom .
I want to be wrapped by joy and die within in its arms.
Death never seemed more beautiful.
Why wouldn't it be ?
It is the end of a new mystery.
A silent ,
mesmerizing world.

wonderful words!!!.... lovely write...good one....

Posted 1 Year Ago


Tania

1 Year Ago

Much appreciated . Thanks
I love it. You sound like a kindred soul. Your musings flow like milk across the milky way. Thank you for sharing.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Tania

1 Year Ago

thank-you glad you liked it :)

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Tania
Tania

Menton, Beirut, France



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