" Was It You "

" Was It You "

A Poem by Sarai Akscyn

                    Was It You


Was that you on the sun kissed easy
        in Dockers shoes and steel blue shirtsleeves.
I thought I heard your wag
        Peddling a faint.

Was that your smile that nicked
        me, beaming anew.
Holding onto a gaze
        Curled in reissued mirth.

It looked like you I pinched
        Carrying parcels and books
I saw the back of you walk away, still
        wearing my daystar.

The night-blinds have lifted the juggins
        And, still, I rummage...
In my quest for the key
        to the nightlatch.

I listen and hear the soundless mime
        lorry the ransomed knob.
 

     

© 2007 Sarai Akscyn


© 2008 Sarai Akscyn



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has a dream like quality of gentle longing.
I love the ending lines..wonderful work!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i like it, i like it...delicious

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

oh, wow! Light and airy but intriguing all the same.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very nicely written write. It has a gentle feel of love peeking from it's words.

Thaks so much for entering my contest and the best of luck to you.

Posted 9 Years Ago


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