We will never be one

We will never be one

A Poem by Astine
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A love story where lovers are far apart and they know they will never be one...

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We, just like the sand in hand
Can never stay forever.
Though the land is the same
And we have a connection
But we are not one....

From those thousands of particles...
I am the one not so productive...
You, you're the one from land of trees...
But I, from those deserts...
And we are not one...

With time when we were going far
Far away to meet ever again.
I didn't cry because nothing broke me.
Perhaps this particle is so small to be broken.
And we are not one...

I wish, we have got hands of that potter.
That potter who could make us a vase.
That hands of love...
Which could make us one...
But finally we are not one....

I miss those pranks I played...
All those moments, I was in them
But those moments are lost in memories..
Just like me in this desert...
And we are not one...

You will someday have a tree in you...
And I, I will always be small
So small, so tiny
That anyone would crush me...
And we, we'll never be one....

© 2018 Astine



Author's Note

Astine
Feel free to criticize me if there is some mistake out here...
I will overcome them next time...

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Sorry dear I do not read mistakes as such > like I do not know the names of people in films
When I watch a film I read them as the character they play not the person playing a character

same with your written words (are they mistakes or do you intend /mean what you write)

I follow your story you/ me are just grains of sand in the universe
I once grew to be a tree but I gave up doing the things which fed me
Now just a grain of sand amongst many others

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Sorry dear I do not read mistakes as such > like I do not know the names of people in films
When I watch a film I read them as the character they play not the person playing a character

same with your written words (are they mistakes or do you intend /mean what you write)

I follow your story you/ me are just grains of sand in the universe
I once grew to be a tree but I gave up doing the things which fed me
Now just a grain of sand amongst many others

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I truly love this write especially that last stanza. very well expressed write here

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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