Failing

I love to hard eyes wide close

focused on what we could be

only if we wasn't so studdern and set on

who we want to be

whats wrong with love

growing and stretching as far she can be

hurt left wanting more

on the trail of (we) you and me

thinking its family first and im not talking about the kids plus you and me

I believed our house was the fortress of love standing as one us agaisnt the world

With allies on standby

from time to time left standing alone

yes of coursed i messed up

but please believe it was all outta love

maybe im to young and dumb to know

how to manage a delicate flower overly love never corrected only pampered & spoiled.

But i choose then and im must choose even now

life only reveals glimpses at a time

seeing the tell tell signs

you must circulate all the data in your mind

I fell to fast before i knew i was in love with a Lily in the valley covered by srubs and mub

So i dug and dug

Til a mountain formed around you

Enlisted you into love recovery

Uncovering beautiful you now your free

now im flity and stuck

gave you a ring but all i hear is excuses growth at a low

im so low i failed

Fully uncovered Blooming red berries me thinking it was a gift took a bite

abdominal pain vomiting reduced heart rate blurred vision drowsiness and red skin rashes

Poisoned by love

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[Captain]

There are some grammatical errors and such, but this is still readable. Like, I could cry.

[biggerthenu]

Thanks for reading and seeing through my mistakes☺️. sadly I’m not very good at grammar but if you would tell me I would gladly fix