Wet Rainy Day

Wet Rainy Day

A Poem by Billy
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Short poem about my first Living memory

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Wet Rainy Day

 

When I think back it is easy to find,

my very first memory, still clear in my mind.

It was when for some adult reason I got in the way,

So in my green quilted anorak I was sent out to play.

 

The rain was quite heavy, I was out on my own,

any play mates were absent, warm and dry in their home.

It was all very peaceful and rain bounced off my hood,

As I splashed in the puddles like little boys should.

 

Unaware of the problems that my parents unfurled,

I felt very happy...in my own little world.

This moment was special in my mind it will stay,

my very first memory on a wet rainy day.


© 2017 Billy



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Billy
Just tell me what you think...does something this personal reach a wider audience.

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Great poem! It flows so well and I feel like a child again when I read this. Great work.

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Billy

10 Months Ago

Thank you.
ApDunamis

10 Months Ago

Your welcome
Enjoyed. Reminded me of an episode about tying my shoes for the first time a long time ago.

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Billy

10 Months Ago

I Still struggle with laces!!!

Thanks for your feed back.
Not a thing wrong with this poem. I loves how it gives you a clear image in your mind. Great job! - r

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

wow...a lovely read it is...Like reading this even i remember some of my memorable days of my childhood...An amazing write.

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on October 30, 2017
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Tags: Childhood, memories, rain, puddles, parents

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Billy
Billy

Edinburgh, Scotland, United Kingdom



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My name is Billy Dolan. I was born in Leith which is part of Edinburgh in Scotland, UK. I have wrote a number of poems over the years but have only shown them to a few close friends. Just inter.. more..

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