Wet Rainy Day

Wet Rainy Day

A Poem by Billy
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Short poem about my first Living memory

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Wet Rainy Day

 

When I think back it is easy to find,

my very first memory, still clear in my mind.

It was when for some adult reason I got in the way,

So in my green quilted anorak I was sent out to play.

 

The rain was quite heavy, I was out on my own,

any play mates were absent, warm and dry in their home.

It was all very peaceful and rain bounced off my hood,

As I splashed in the puddles like little boys should.

 

Unaware of the problems that my parents unfurled,

I felt very happy...in my own little world.

This moment was special in my mind it will stay,

my very first memory on a wet rainy day.


© 2017 Billy



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Billy
Just tell me what you think...does something this personal reach a wider audience.

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Great poem! It flows so well and I feel like a child again when I read this. Great work.

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Billy

3 Weeks Ago

Thank you.
ApDunamis

2 Weeks Ago

Your welcome
Enjoyed. Reminded me of an episode about tying my shoes for the first time a long time ago.

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Billy

3 Weeks Ago

I Still struggle with laces!!!

Thanks for your feed back.
Not a thing wrong with this poem. I loves how it gives you a clear image in your mind. Great job! - r

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

wow...a lovely read it is...Like reading this even i remember some of my memorable days of my childhood...An amazing write.

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Added on October 30, 2017
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Tags: Childhood, memories, rain, puddles, parents

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Billy
Billy

Edinburgh, Scotland, United Kingdom



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My name is Billy Dolan. I was born in Leith which is part of Edinburgh in Scotland, UK. I have wrote a number of poems over the years but have only shown them to a few close friends. Just inter.. more..

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