The Other- World

The snow falls

on lillies of red.

Water rains,

down on my head.

Clear skies,

and beautiful eyes.

The mountains and

the greatest divide.

 

It saves the world,

the other world.

Towers of metal,

and the concrete in the sky.

The wailing fox,

and the wolves cry.

 

Our world,

not the other world.

Of cities and towns,

not a creature around.

 

We took their home.

We took their lives.

We would not stop,

by the natures cry.

 

The other world,

not our world.

This is really their world.

Reviews

[Rain (YouoweYoupay)]

Interesting topic and colorful imagery. Nice write. Keep it up.

[Short.Nerd]

Nice write! Keep up the good work :)

[Michael Davis]

Good format, good structure and I actually like it.