Silent Song of a Dead Love

Silence

Silence

And so on…

 

Enchanted

In your silent music

I am.

As if,

There has never been ‘time’.

Engrossed

In the rhythm of the silent song

Long lost from life.

Only the presence

Of the sweet smell of your skin

Borrowed from my memories

Summons.

And the silence,

More real than my existence

Is the reason

I stand in front of your tomb

Everyday

Enchanted.

 

Silence

Silence

And so on… 

Reviews

[Whiskurz]

This is such a Beautifully written piece.....Bravo my friend.....Whisk

[Sukriti Suki]

Oh nice...so so nice....I like how simple short words...no complication delivers such complicated dark emotion. Wonderful work.

[J.]

I see the symbolism, but you seem to have no transitions from the symbolism of being lost to the actual person. If you actually had one then it was an awkward one. The statements were too simple. The formatting was a major distraction.

[Gilbert Saint]

And it wasn't that sad for me. I guess the depth of the poem was compromised by simple wording, overstate things and understate them where deserved.

[Dearantlers]

Ahh, it's sad. Really sad, and so full of emotion, and yet so short, and so well written! Very well done!

[Raven Starhawk]

A valiant discovery I have made within the treasure this displays. You penned this beyond well and I am enjoying line after line.

[Chris G. Vaillancourt]

nice piece of writing

[The Cobra Lounge]

I really enjoyed this poem. The emotion is very strong in this writing despite the fact it is short and brief. Well done!

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powerful read but enjoyed reading. Nice job.....xo

[Coyote Poetry]

A very strong poem. I like how you made a bad place seem beautiful and peaceful. I'm not a fan of graveyards. I believe there is nothing left but for us to remember people we miss. Thank you for a excellent poem.
Coyote