Eggs

Eggs

A Poem by Black
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I made this for fun , just read it, and please give me critics I just love eggs

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Eggs
The eggs sizzling in the pan
The ways to use
The ways began

It could be raw
Like an open wound
It could make you sick
or even thick

THick will be your veins
The cholosterol rising
Which is a shame

Laying, awaiting
Is a hearth attack
But I still love this greatly made egg!

© 2011 Black


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Your words are true. I like a over easy egg on toast. Nothing better. A very good poem. Food is our number one desire. Nothing wrong with poetry about food and sweets. A excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


Say "what a shame" instead of "which is a shame". I love eggs! Scrambled, preferably.
Great poem!

Posted 12 Years Ago


As an egg lover (Eggland's Best Eggs), I've never seen anyone speak so highly of eggs o.O. Thanks for letting us know you feel lol.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Eggs oh those lovely juicy eggs, scrambled poached or fried I'll love them till I die....::
And that maybe sooner than I think!! Hmmm maybe I should diet or just use more ink. ;0). Enjoyed

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

fun write...exploring with free verse...I like..keep it up.

Posted 12 Years Ago


very nice message like it..........

Posted 12 Years Ago


LOL I really liked this one. It made me smile :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


hahahahahahaha.....good one i enjoyd it....lol.....
Regards
PRODICAL

Posted 12 Years Ago


It was a really funny piece. I liked it. Well done.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Its quite silly on the surface, but i think it might have a deeper meaning!
if it does, i didnt find it! maybe you hope someone will have a heart attack? 0_e
great piece anyhow!

Posted 12 Years Ago



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