Love

FIRST ONE I MADE WITH SOMEONE this one is made with Chares of this site :) hope you like it..

Love

You disagree,
because im not willing to see,
the love you claim to have for me,
I know, your not willing to share,

The love is true, forever true
thats the most important thing i have to share with you
that thing I have inside will never die for you
its bigger then oceans and seas
bigger then the world or universe,
all love just for you, coming from me

Well so you claim
To obtain that emotion that you have
Still it always alters like sun and snow

 it still would not be right to deny,
but those feelings dont touch me
because your not nearby

And so it follows
You drift away like a cloud across the sky
 your emotions uncaptured
and im staying behind
the cloud without a sky
thats the way i feel
until i follow the memories,
and capture you again

So we fight on and on
No one leaving until its done
No one staying, maybe sometimes until dawn
then the fights starts over again
emotions uncaptured by each  end

Reviews

[∂αʌ<..]

i love this collaboration...a magnificent mix of different muses on love!
love it!

[prodicallife]

very good writting..:):)

[Daniel Thomas Andrew Da..]

The way you express the depth of love in the early part of this poem is wonderful. Full complete love. Really well written. The poem is of a good length, dramatic and intense, and deep and thoughtful. It is well written with good use of words and nice imagery. I liked it a lot. Daniel

[amdc101]

I love this poem! Great job, keep writing!

[Coyote Poetry]

Love can keep you up all night. Some discussions and problems must be solved. I like the feel and the desire of this poem.
"and im staying behind
the cloud without a sky
thats the way i feel
until i follow the memories,
and capture you again "
I like those words above. Thank you for a excellent poem.
Coyote

[deeps]

This is very nicely done, Enjoyed the read.

[Desmund Tiny]

I like it, very nice poem...... ^^,

[TheElfPrincess]

I like how you worked with different colors. It was a great collab and turned out very well.

[Vinod Kumar U K]

Wait the hot clouds got the cool wind for showering the cooly bold first rain drops, good....(Bigger than the ocean)

[alexis]

Great job