Happiness

Happiness

A Poem by Serenity Faith
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I'm just so happeh! ^_^

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My heart smiles widely

Bubbles fill my lungs

laughter leaks from my eyes

© 2012 Serenity Faith


Author's Note

Serenity Faith
short and sweet ^_^

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like it.. this is short but very nice :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


The best 3 sentences I've ever read in my life!

Posted 11 Years Ago


You write some really long poems. I was looking for something digestible and this is it.

You are right, short and sweet.

I was wishing for an "and" either beginning the last line or ending the middle line, and I realize why now. That would make it 17 syllables.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Very nice! It is cute!

Posted 11 Years Ago


The first line just fills you up with loads of cheer haha, it's just so sweet sounding. The second just reminds me of innocence and childhood and the last is just fantastic. Haha, joyful read (:

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Serenity Faith

11 Years Ago

I'm glad it brought you the same, Happiness ^_^ Thank you!
:D Happiness is a wonderful thing.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sweet :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Emily looks happy
Her laughter captivates me
I stare like an owl

This is a messy response but a real one from my heart.



Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Serenity Faith

11 Years Ago

You're heartfelt reply only adds to my happiness Zainul ^_^ Thank you!
zainul

11 Years Ago

I love making others happy.
You wanted to be happy today by some awesome review.
So,I ch.. read more

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Added on July 20, 2012
Last Updated on July 20, 2012

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