How Dare You

The feeling I had when I first fell in love and when I had my daughter.

How dare you!

look at me, through hazy eyes

How dare you!

judge me, through foolish lies

You say that I am wrong

who told you, you were right?

I stayed true to my virtues

I still stand, in pure light

How dare you!

tell me who it is, that I should love

How dare you!

are you the one, the creator above?

I gave love to only one,

Since then, I have loved no other.

I pity you, the foolish you

do you even love, thy married brother?

How dare you!

speak your words of wisdoms

How dare you

place me, amidst the hoodlums

I am young, and he was young

we could have waited longer

a love like ours, surpasses stars

your hate just makes us stronger

How dare you!

place yourself above me

How dare you!

Do your eyes even clearly see?

Are you the voice of God?

I beg to differ dear.

If my child wasn't meant to be

then darling, she wouldn't be here.

How dare you!

speak in a voice of sorrow

How dare you!

Wish me, a brighter morrow

You can scream, and shout alike,

and preach the words of rapture

that only shows, the almighty one

whose soul that he will capture

So with this now, I'll say again

How DARE you!

A simple human

How dare YOU!

judge ME, before trying to look in

How

     dare

           you....

   

Author's Note

Sorry, I got a little fired up with this one xD

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the directness of the poem. When we hold our child for the first time. A permanent bond is made. Love is uncontrolled. Heart know what is true and follow the right road. No weakness in the poem. I like the desire and the hidden story. Thank you for the outstanding poem.
Coyote

[judith106]

I also have a child that I know was meant to be. Even if others were not planning on him. I now know he was a major life plan for me. I just did not know until he surprised me when I knew he was coming I never explained myself to anyone. This hit home for me..good write, glad I came across it.

[Lost in Wonderland]

Wow so passionate. I read it like it would be used to tell someone off. It's not right to judge people "let he who is without sin cast the first stone". This poem was very well done!
God bless

[Serenity Faith]

Hahahaha in a way it was...and I most definitely agree. I tried to make that clear through this. ^_^ thank you for reading.

[Lost in Wonderland]

no problem:)

[♪The Girl Next Do..]

Excellent. The anger you show in this is totally justified, and I love they way you chose to express it. Another amazing poem, Emily! Keep writing! :)

[Eagle Cruagh]

Creatively constructed.
Defiantly and righteously hostile.
Hotly defensive of your proper status.
Incredibly proper and just.
Your poem expresses the indignation of
most of us who are inappropriately judged.
Thank You ,
---- John

[Brandon Mathis]

HOW DARE YOU....write such o good poem!!!

[Skye]

No need to apologise, the emotion in this poem is so touching and I love how you formated it.