Losing out

What are you losing out on?

losing out on patience
losing out on time
losing out on friendship
losing out on a dime

losing out on opportunities
losing out on hatred
losing out on happiness
losing out on tears shed

losing out on comedy
losing out on shrewdness
losing out on inheritance
losing out on the obvious

losing out on hassles
losing out on love
losing out on optimism
losing out on all the above

Reviews

[Cloud]

losing out on hassles
losing out on love
losing out on optimism
losing out on all the above....awesome ink that you used. it's damn nice, losing' out, now gotta confused what i lost or gonna b loson' on...lol, anyway, that's really a pretty amazin' write. each phrase has it's own diff. meanin' n showed depth of "LOSON' OUT", hey, if may i ask then from where you got this to write....?

[Pankaj Lohia]

its sad when you have lost the thing you loved the most.. without any fault of your own

[Keegan D'souza]

I'm normally not a fan of repetitiveness but i quiet enjoyed this, it was sad yet had a certain truth and relativity to it.

[Pradeep Nair]

losing out on everything..
losing out on infinity...

Strong.

[Rhea]

a beautiful piece... I really enjoyed it. The rhyme scheme was nice.

[Katrina Mckeown]

so true for so many, a well penned piece, honest and true! thanks for sharing!

[impulsive615]

I hate losing out on things. Experience is life's greatest pleasure, and it is never good to miss out on anything. Nice write =]

[Coyote Poetry]

Nice flow of thoughts in this poem. Not a positive poem. Sometime it feel like all we do is wrong. Good to stop and find a better road to be upon. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Ishan Sadwelkar]

This is one of those poems which you can go on and on and still it would make perfect sense.
Interesting read.

[0AudreyClaire0]

That was great and very well done! And I'm sure, for a lot of people, is relatable in more ways than one. Nice poem. :)
-Aud