Fallen Hearts

Fallen Hearts

A Poem by Lovecraft
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A notion on unrequited Love.

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How far have you Fallen when your
Heart no longer beats for another,
An insomnia of the Hearts accord
That seems to have been misplaced.

She told you that she loved you
But you can see the truth in her
Blue eyes, beautiful as ever.

The aching pain feels permanent,
Like a shadow on a sunny day.

You hate her for not feeling what she cannot,
In spite of knowing it can never be forced,
No matter how much your Heart hurts.


© 2017 Lovecraft



Author's Note

Lovecraft
An ode to the classical tale of an unrequited Love. Feel free to speak honestly about what you think of this.

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You hate her for not feeling what she cannot,
In spite of knowing it can never be forced,
No matter how much your Heart hurts....

love can never be forced..it needs to flow from within and yes it would reflect in the eyes...very true..
and oh yes unrequited love for sure is a pain in all wrong places :)

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Galadriel

1 Month Ago

thank you.... i am not into hunting... ;)
so do not knw this guy... i try to avoid blood most.. read more
Lovecraft

1 Month Ago

Lol. You are not fond of getting your hands dirty. ;)
Galadriel

1 Month Ago

hahah.... arrows and guns seems fine.. no knives and swords....keep the distance ;) i don't mind goi.. read more



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"You hate her for not feeling what she cannot"
That's the great line in there. The emotion a man felt within. I like the line so much. Your good at this lovecraft. Love that.

Sincerely,
CAPOLAVORO

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Lovecraft

1 Month Ago

I'm honored, Capo. To be a Capo in the Italian Mafia... You must be important. ;P
Love with limits or boundaries. Sometimes love can encompass on heart so differently than anothers. You penned both sides well..

Posted 1 Month Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Honest and true words my friend.
"The aching pain feels permanent,
Like a shadow on a sunny day."
The above lines. Realistic words and thoughts. Once sweet love can turn to darkness. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote



Posted 1 Month Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lovecraft

1 Month Ago

Thanks, Coyote! Nice to "see" you again. I had several months where I had to deal with stuff so that.. read more
Coyote Poetry

1 Month Ago

I'm glad you are back and you are welcome.
Don't doubt you already know how it is - logic, age, experience tells us day in, day out: Love is the winner. supreme BUT on its own terms. It can carry a heart to the heavens or throw it from a cliff into the deepest deep. Your words, your sad but beautiful words, prove exactly that.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Lovecraft

1 Month Ago

Those dreams are a two-edged blade though.
emmajoy

1 Month Ago

I blunt them with indifference! (how about that for an instant reply!)
Lovecraft

1 Month Ago

Nice. Poems within reviews of poems. :)
I love this truthfully I think this is.... priceless heartbreak

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lovecraft

1 Month Ago

Loving someone that doesn't love you is always heartbreaking...
Queen FireFly

1 Month Ago

yeah I understand the feel all to well....
Ah like the poem. Your awesome at poetry!

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lovecraft

1 Month Ago

Thank you. Flattery will get you everywhere. ;)
PreciousAngel

1 Month Ago

You're very welcome. Lol.
BEAUTIFUL! The intricacy of the thoughts that this poem is trying to convey is so beautifully knitted that I am struck. Loved it!

Posted 1 Month Ago


Lovecraft

1 Month Ago

Thank you. I was listening to Bon Iver when I wrote this.
This is a feeling I think we all feel at one point in our lives and it's truly painful. On both sides. Loved every bit of it

Posted 1 Month Ago


You've beautifully portrayed the very important truth about true love, 'It never, never, dies" no matter how painful the departure was, somewhere or the other in some corners of the heart and soul, those memories still linger.The memories, of an incomplete, undestined love, where the souls loved and valued each other, but oh, the time and destiny, they didn't favor and the two persons have to move on almost unwilling...With the incessant sobbing heart.and yes, eyes never lie, words can, sometimes actions too can, but eyes don't.thet are always filled with truth ready to be read only by the one who actually can.


I loved this piece from you, and these lines mfrim your poem indeed touched me 😊:

" The aching pain feels permanent,
Like a shadow on a sunny day.

You hate her for not feeling what she cannot,
In spite of knowing it can never be forced,
No matter how much your Heart hurts.
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Very well done, kelvin!


-Saumya.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lovecraft

1 Month Ago

Thank you, Saumya. By the way, my name is Kevin.
:P
Saumya

1 Month Ago

Oops!Sorry 😀
My keyboard is so used it to typing 'Kelvin' that it typed this word here too.. read more
Saumya

1 Month Ago

Correction: 'Kevin ' 😀🙈

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