Fallen Hearts

Fallen Hearts

A Poem by Lovecraft
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A notion on unrequited Love.

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How far have you Fallen when your
Heart no longer beats for another,
An insomnia of the Hearts accord
That seems to have been misplaced.

She told you that she loved you
But you can see the truth in her
Blue eyes, beautiful as ever.

The aching pain feels permanent,
Like a shadow on a sunny day.

You hate her for not feeling what she cannot,
In spite of knowing it can never be forced,
No matter how much your Heart hurts.


© 2017 Lovecraft



Author's Note

Lovecraft
An ode to the classical tale of an unrequited Love. Feel free to speak honestly about what you think of this.

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You hate her for not feeling what she cannot,
In spite of knowing it can never be forced,
No matter how much your Heart hurts....

love can never be forced..it needs to flow from within and yes it would reflect in the eyes...very true..
and oh yes unrequited love for sure is a pain in all wrong places :)

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ardra

10 Months Ago

thank you.... i am not into hunting... ;)
so do not knw this guy... i try to avoid blood most.. read more
Lovecraft

10 Months Ago

Lol. You are not fond of getting your hands dirty. ;)
Ardra

10 Months Ago

hahah.... arrows and guns seems fine.. no knives and swords....keep the distance ;) i don't mind goi.. read more



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How many thousands of us know this feeling? Some time ago I posted a poem here not to dissimilar from this. Its at this site the title is "Alone In My Wonder" You might enjoy it.

Take care - Dave


Posted 6 Months Ago


Lovecraft

6 Months Ago

Thanks, I'll be sure to check it out.
Wondrous poem, Kevin!!!
Gorgeously portrayed...Love must be free to flow in ones heart without any force, for not even the one that owns the heart, has hardly any control over it. Sometimes one is wonderful but the heart simply cannot agree with the mind. I guess the heart has its own mind.

I hope all is well with you dear.
Hugs
Sil :-)

Posted 7 Months Ago


I like this, It has a lot of truth to it.

Posted 8 Months Ago


"You hate her for not feeling what she cannot,"

H.O.L.Y.
W.O.W.

I have no more words.

Posted 8 Months Ago


"You hate her for not feeling what she cannot"
That's the great line in there. The emotion a man felt within. I like the line so much. Your good at this lovecraft. Love that.

Sincerely,
CAPOLAVORO

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Lovecraft

10 Months Ago

I'm honored, Capo. To be a Capo in the Italian Mafia... You must be important. ;P
Love with limits or boundaries. Sometimes love can encompass on heart so differently than anothers. You penned both sides well..

Posted 10 Months Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Honest and true words my friend.
"The aching pain feels permanent,
Like a shadow on a sunny day."
The above lines. Realistic words and thoughts. Once sweet love can turn to darkness. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote



Posted 10 Months Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lovecraft

10 Months Ago

Thanks, Coyote! Nice to "see" you again. I had several months where I had to deal with stuff so that.. read more
Coyote Poetry

10 Months Ago

I'm glad you are back and you are welcome.
Don't doubt you already know how it is - logic, age, experience tells us day in, day out: Love is the winner. supreme BUT on its own terms. It can carry a heart to the heavens or throw it from a cliff into the deepest deep. Your words, your sad but beautiful words, prove exactly that.

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Lovecraft

10 Months Ago

Those dreams are a two-edged blade though.
emmajoy

10 Months Ago

I blunt them with indifference! (how about that for an instant reply!)
Lovecraft

10 Months Ago

Nice. Poems within reviews of poems. :)
I love this truthfully I think this is.... priceless heartbreak

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lovecraft

10 Months Ago

Loving someone that doesn't love you is always heartbreaking...
soldier onwards

10 Months Ago

yeah I understand the feel all to well....

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Added on August 28, 2017
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Tags: Poetry, Poem, Heart, Love, Unrequited, Sad

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Lovecraft

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