Me And My Sweetheart Are Tying The Knot

Me And My Sweetheart Are Tying The Knot

A Poem by BlakPrince
"

celebrate love

"

Friends, book the hall, order the dress

and suit, buy sweet fruits and flowers,

make a phone call, inform our guests:

the after-party's on for hours,

with Slow Jam and non-stop Hip Hop.

Me and my sweetheart are tying the knot!


Spread the word to town and village,

that love is being celebrated

in sacred rituals of marriage

where two souls are initiated,

their names inscribed on precious rock.

Me and my sweetheart are tying the knot!


Soul-love is the same everywhere:

in the heart of prince or peasant,

we all want tender love and care

that is true, mutual and pleasant,

in the castle or ghetto block.

Me and my sweetheart are tying the knot!


Let there be a long procession

spilling on the street and pavement

the champagne of the reception,

murmuring joy and amazement,

eating chicken wings and the lot!

Me and my sweetheart are tying the knot!


Yes, we'll jump the proverbial broom.

Bride and groom will live out their dreams!

We will think of the honeymoon

so soon, we'll rush to wear our rings,

to consummate the cream of the crop!

Me and my sweetheart are tying the knot!


I was made for her, she for me

before the world even began;

that's how love feels for souls who'll be

sharing roof and bed, living as one.

It's the kind of love hate can't stop.

Me and my sweetheart are tying the knot!


© 2018 BlakPrince



Author's Note

BlakPrince
This is dedicated to all present and future true lovers.

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I like how there is a consistent celebratory tone through the poem. And the way you write reminds me so much of old famous poets I really love the way it sounds when I read it. I also like how you revert to the same last line on each stanza and rhyme. Very well written.

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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So sweet! This is a reminder to us all what loving can feel like; that overwhelming joy that just makes you want to dance and sing. May we all experience it and celebrate it :)

Posted 7 Months Ago


Love deserves to be celebrated real talk

Posted 7 Months Ago


A very hopeful poem. For a minute. I thought you found joy and happiness. I liked the positive energy and the feel of the words. Thank you my friend for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 7 Months Ago


That is one beautiful poem celebrating the true spirit of love. Great work! :)

Posted 7 Months Ago


This was beautiful. I can feel the happiness and love flowing from each and every word. It ran through me like I was watching a happy couple smile in while holding each other. I was almost in tears by the end.

Posted 8 Months Ago


I like how there is a consistent celebratory tone through the poem. And the way you write reminds me so much of old famous poets I really love the way it sounds when I read it. I also like how you revert to the same last line on each stanza and rhyme. Very well written.

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The poem itself really feels like a celebration. You can’t help but read it with a smile and get a little excited. It exudes joy, and I’m very glad to have read it!

Posted 8 Months Ago


The thing I love most about this piece is the jovial tone. It was beautifully written and descriptive enough for me to envision the event as if I were in attendance. Lovely work!

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

What a glorious way to celebrate love. Your poem sounds more like a love song and fills heart with such a joy. Beautifully crafted, wonderful reading!

Posted 8 Months Ago


This is a poem for the ages! Some of the lines indeed are not particularly universal, and the last stanza is the only one that needs a bit of musicality tweaking (some words fall on the wrong sylLAble, and other lines need a bit more for the musicality to flow over), but this is Fan-Tas-Tic! It's filled with utter joy and power - the power of love - and this is truly amazing! Well freaking done! I must enjoyed this!

Posted 8 Months Ago



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BlakPrince
BlakPrince

London, East London, United Kingdom



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I am originally from the Ivory Coast, West Africa. I am Christian.I speak, write, read French and English. French is my first language. Just as God changed Abram to Abraham, and Sara to Sahara, I felt.. more..

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