When Fingers Find Guitar's Strings

When Fingers Find Guitar's Strings

A Poem by BlakPrince
"

love is music, let's play

"

When fingers find guitar's strings,

both adjust to desire's wish,

for the connection it brings

uplifts five senses to sixth.


Guitar echoes a sweet moan,

with fingers' delicate strokes,

in a slow smooth rise in tone,

as the climax of pure notes


lead both to sway to love's tune

back and forth just like the winds

in sync with flowers, sun and June-

when fingers find guitar's strings!



© 2018 BlakPrince



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BlakPrince
All reviews welcome. Thank you.

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This is so good! Loved the way you used the metaphor. Love and connection, put together.
Thanks for sharing this.

Posted 2 Months Ago


Oh what a beautiful harmonious connection, I want to be the guitar strings🌹

Posted 2 Months Ago


BlakPrince

2 Months Ago

Thank you for your review. You can be the guitar strings anytime.
Thoughts In Time

2 Months Ago

Thankyou 🌹in the right place and time where I find my perfect strummer🌹
Thoughts In Time

2 Months Ago

My pleasure I loved your words written🌹
A amazing poem my friend. To play song. I wish I could. I loved your description of the guitar. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 2 Months Ago


Love the metaphor and musicality in this poem. Love the interpretation of the experience of fingers first finding guitar strings as lovers first touching each other- so on-point. Beautiful language, form, flow, rhythm and rhyme. Elegantly and lyrically passionate. Great write.

Posted 3 Months Ago


BlakPrince

3 Months Ago

Thank you for your kind and honest review and acute observation of the association I made with music.. read more
Annette Pisano-Higley

3 Months Ago

You are very welcome. They are one and the same as you beautifully described.
This is really good, this could be easily done as a song. Awesome

Posted 3 Months Ago


I love this poem. I do play a bit of acoustic guitar and you truly captured that ultimate feeling when you become one with those strings creating that musical vibration. It really is an addictive, soulful experience.

"Guitar echoes a sweet moan,
with fingers' delicate strokes,
in a slow smooth rise in tone,
as the climax of pure notes"

Excellently penned.





Posted 3 Months Ago


BlakPrince

3 Months Ago

Thank you, brother. I appreciate your review.
Greetings Black Prince What an extremely awesome poem Would love to send to my many friends that plays guitar Very enjoyable reading So beautiful loving it a lot Thanks for sharing your wonderful gifted talent Can i share on my fb page? let me know keep awesome

Posted 3 Months Ago



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Added on January 24, 2018
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BlakPrince
BlakPrince

London, East London, United Kingdom



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I am originally from the Ivory Coast, West Africa. I am Christian.I speak, write, read French and English. French is my first language. Just as God changed Abram to Abraham, and Sara to Sahara, I felt.. more..

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