Like a Whisper In a Dark Room

Brown bohemian eyes shine
Red lips to entice
To devour

Warm breath flows
Like a whisper
In a dark room

Cool rain
Patters against French doors
Streaks and trickles over clear glass

A touch that lasts forever
Buried deep
Branded to memory

A tremble
A sigh
Knowing this cannot be duplicated

No matter how many others
You kiss
Or touch

You'll never be here again
Drumbeat--staccato
Pleasure licking along your skin

Wild rush
Never see your soul
Reflected in your lover's eyes

Reviews

[SingPoetically]

This is a beautiful poem filled with lovely emotions

[Mary C]

This poem was very lovely and very rich in the moment ...

[John Anderson]

What a unique and thought-provoking poem. Great diction and flow help to make this an excellent poem. Well done!

[Anne Timmins]

Outstanding work! This is incredible!

[Lyn Anderson]

I love this. It has a wonderful rhythm to it, a dark, emotional piece.

[Wandering Minstrel]

This is contemplative, moving and done in unique and original style!

[Susan Beth Horvath]

I am so glad I stopped by to read this piece. Nicely done!

[Matching Socks]

Quite breathtaking. Very much enjoyed this one.

[Tricia Pattinson]

The allure is mesmerizing to read. And your hint of passion so lightly touched! A Seductive poem!