I'd Give The World For Your Smile

I'd Give The World For Your Smile

A Poem by Blake Q Hatfield
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I wrote this for a friend who was a little down.

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there a friend out there
and she's a little blue
so darlin' i throw my love
my heart to you

 

if i was a clown
would it give you a smile
if i was clever
would that be an upside-down frown
if i were charming
would that be blushing

 

i'm no miracle answer man
just a listener
hoping that you'll find what you want
that it's all picture perfect and true
for now i can only hope to help
i can only listen and understand
and try my best
to make you smile

© 2008 Blake Q Hatfield


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OH OH, I love this! Your poem hit my heart, it's full of all the things that I would want to hear but also say. It's a very sweet poem for you to write. What a precious write.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Overall a good read, keep up the good work and feel free to send me a request when ever..
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Posted 16 Years Ago



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Added on February 24, 2008

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Blake Q Hatfield
Blake Q Hatfield

Philadelphia, PA



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I began writing back in '94 and I've been in love with it ever since. Music has a big influence on how I write, and what topics I choose to write about. I like to write a clever piece every now and th.. more..

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