Hello, Hello

I didn’t know what I wanted to do with my life

And she said hello, hello

I didn’t know where I wanted to go

And she said hello, hello

 

I look back at the times

Before she came into my life

The waters ran still

And the flowers never bloomed

The lights never shined in my room

I was out, I was down

My face pointed to the ground

And just when I thought the world would fall

 

And then she said hello, hello

Oh hello, hello

She said hello, hello

 

I didn’t know what I wanted

Didn’t know what to say

My life had been so down

Never thought things would turn around

 

And on the day I thought there would be

Something better, something more

I began to loose a little hope

But then she said hello, hello

She said hello, hello

 

Well could it have been fate

Something so sincerely divine

A face so beautiful and so kind

She drove away the clouds

She healed the surface wounds

And worked down to the soul

 

As she took her hands
Put them on my head

And lifted it up to the stars

With the look in her eyes

The sparkle in her smile

She began to say hello, hello

All she said was hello, hello

 

I look back at the time

Don’t know if she meant

What I think she said

Can’t get it outta my mind, outta my head

And all it was, was hello, hello

A simple and complex hello, hello

She said hello, hello

Reviews

[Adela Muresan]

This is so touching.
For Crist sake man, lose the ''hello, hello'' , it's so childish and annoing. You should try to mention HI once in a poem, and no more helloz .

Great write.

A.M.

[Laura E. Aranda]

This sounds as if it really came straight from my husband's mouth....not that i am anything special but it is what he says all the time. Our marriage saved him....anyway!!! I like your technique and thank you for entering my Inspiration contest.