Dial Zero For Complete

My Issues...

I misused...

I Miss you...

I get tired of looking in your eyes at Perfect Hopeful horizons misleading to waterfalls that only begin the cycle of me feeling Completely...

Too Filled Up to ever take the time to empty out my pride and turn away from my dreaming,

These dreams that you encourage me to chase without preparation 

Just a very simple process of strongly believing In a mathematical equation that, seems senseless to envy.

For It's another notch under your belt every time you deceive me.

                                                   Into a smile for a while but my friend not this evening.

So Now I'll have to make do with what you left me believing.

                  Which is 1 plus 2 plus 3 plus 4 plus 5 plus 6 plus 7 plus 8 plus 9 plus 0 equals completely.

Reviews

[Taino]

incredible! The way you structured your poem, the passion behind each line, had me rereading your poem. Each time digging deeper. Amazing work and energy. Please keep writing.

[Blank_fortunes]

I definitely appreciate it, and will do.

[DaughterNature]

LOVE the beginning! I'll always be a big fan of playing with words and sounds, and that opening is so solid.

I also like the resonance of "horizons" and "chasing dreams" across the lines.

[Blank_fortunes]

Thank you I planned on using the beginning a lot more than I did.