Babel

Why is it that I'm finally free,

yet it's like my spirit has not been freed?

Why is it that I just can't seem to leave the past behind me,

Yet,according to others,I haven't been through much?

Why is it that I just can't seem to get all this off my chest?

Is it that is had so much bottled up?

Even more than I've envisioned?

 

What sorrow...

 

Such blasphemy!

 

Blasphemy for the mere fact that my God has delivered me!

How ungrateful am I?

What have I done??

Who am I fooling?

 

Anger; bursts like magma!

Melting everyone who crosses my path!

My path of wrath!

The path that miscellaneous debri has found itself on!

How pityful!

 

Depression; I despise you!

How gross you are!

You are not of God...how could it be??

 

Could it be that I was living in my own hell?..

 

Was I subjecting myself to this unnecessary hurt?

 

Charmian-Marie....I pity you!

 

Author's Note

It just came out...

Reviews

[Broken Warrior]

... Very self-attacking poem. Good write, however more attention with respect to your person, should be on the escape than the escapee.

[Violeta]

beautiful name you have, and you also wrote an excellent piece. suddenly sad, then angry, then confused, truly an emotional work. wonderful

[Lyrical Love]

Oh my...
This is a lovely piece that whispers loudly
your voice in life. I hear you loud and clear Queen! Continue to write there is something
wonderful in your path-just walk into it!

[luke312]

Excellent very well written and is something that can only be written from experience, the hurt you expected to go away won't go just yet more will have to change and more time has to past.

[BlessedLove]

Btw...."Charmian-Marie" is my real name...