Missing you...

Missing you...

A Poem by BlessedLove
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I long to hear your voice calling out my name..

Calling my name when it's no longer a game.

I long to feel your cheek rub against mine,

Every one of your soothing touches; sending sparks up my spine.

I long to feel your body perfectly alligned behind me,

Your heart beating excessively fast; my affection grows at every beat.

I long to be in your arms,

Just feeling like your "lucky charm".

I long to just be in your presence,

I know there'll be no pretence.

 

I long for these things..however,I'm not permitted to obtain them,

I'm not allowed to fully satisfy this emotion; from our bond it stems.

Though I know I should be in the process of moving on,

There's something about you that just allows my emotions to dawn...

I just want you to be mine,though I know that won't be,

I just wish that you were right for me.

All I know is that right or not,I want you close,

I'd love to take you like an overdose....

I long to just feel that sense of sexual tension between us once more...

I'm just totally missing you...this seems to have reached my core...

© 2008 BlessedLove


Author's Note

BlessedLove
Lust or not, I just wrote from my heart.

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There is something powerful, and magnetic when trying to resist what feels soooo right...
and move ahead into the unknown. I suppose when it is "right" that it shall be
even greater, because it will become true.
"I'd love to take you like an overdose....
I long to just feel that sense of sexual tension between us once more..."
love those lines...


Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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There is something powerful, and magnetic when trying to resist what feels soooo right...
and move ahead into the unknown. I suppose when it is "right" that it shall be
even greater, because it will become true.
"I'd love to take you like an overdose....
I long to just feel that sense of sexual tension between us once more..."
love those lines...


Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

very deep i like it a lot and you can tell its from your heart.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow charms, with each poem, your expression grows so significantly. This truly exemplifies expression, true poetry! So much i can relate to! Keep writing and lets hope all our questions, our seemingly elusive results will be brought to an answer of willing acceptance!

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

All I know is that right or not,I want you close,
I'd love to take you like an overdose....
I long to just feel that sense of sexual tension between us once more...
I'm just totally missing you...this seems to have reached my core...

This is a longing and a desire of missing, i like these lines right here, this is wonderful.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nicely written. Good choice of words.

Posted 15 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Lust or not I am glad you opened up your heart and shared this with us (readers). I to share in this problem and I try to write the sin away from me as you have. Great piece. Please keep writing. I will keep reading.

Posted 15 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Very Righteous Charms Very Righteous Indeed Things like this does take time

Again great choice of words and righteous expressions

Posted 15 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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BlessedLove

Kingston, Jamaica



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I'm a Christian and I strive to be more than an ordinary servant. I have a love for music and poetry as these are the means through which I express myself efficiently..or rather, to my satisfaction. .. more..

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