Second Chance.

Everyone needs a second chance,

to make up on the wrong they did,

to just start over with a new life.

Everyone deserves the chance,

to sing a new song to the heavens,

to listen to the angles weep with joy.

No matter who you are,

or what you did,

you deserve a Second Chance,

to a new life.

You deserve to be happy,

you deserve to sing,

to dance,

and to live.

Even though the world can be cruel,

and people judgmental,

It does not mean you are not special,

It does not mean you don't deserve to live,

or to be happy.

It does not mean you can't have a family,

or friends,

or someone who cares about you,

Because everyone deserves a Second Chance.

Even You.

Reviews

[Reviews]

This feels a little cliche and not well enough thought out. There needs to be more depth put into this with stronger images and heavier emotions.

[Ripple of Aqua]

Very hopful and humble. These are words of a wise one.

[Daytonight]

I agree...everyone deserves a second chance. Good work. Keep on penning.

[TheElfPrincess]

A lovely poem, I enjoyed reading this very much. Many people who get second changes don't deserve it and many people who don't get second changes do deserve it. Well written, I liked it.

[BrynnaW.]

New and different. Wonderfully written. Unfortunately, we can't always get a second chance even when we deserve one. :( Still, I really enjoyed reading this! :) Good job! Keep up the good work!

[Kho-San]

Nice, this ios certainly something new, I haven't read about forgiving a lot of times, but this is the first time I've read about being forgiven.
Excellent, creative, unique, original. Well done :D

[Hunter C. Brown]

this poem is full of truth and wisdom. i enjoyed it, good work

[Kearra]

i do need a second chance :) so refreshing :))

[Coyote Poetry]

I had many second chances. Most of us will make many mistakes. Life is fair journey. We must forgive the sins against us and try to be kind. I like the complete poem. A very good ending to a excellent poem.
Coyote

[Sakib]

It's a refreshing poem. Nice one.