Inner Thoughts

>.> whoa, this is pretty dark. Anyway, this isn't really a story but its not much of a poem either, so just deal with it.

Inner Thoughts

 

Death is the ultimate salvation, we will be rewarded our dark deeds with the lust of our evil demise

I want darkness to thrive on inside, yet not waste this possible one chance of pure life

You can't see the stars without darkness

Shadows are our demonized souls, never trust

We shall all die at some point, so why fight it now?

Not all f*****g black people are ghetto

How will Religious people feel when they finally see there is no God

The horns of Satan shall penetrate your soul

We should eat one another to know and feel other bodies and minds;
devour our souls and corpses and be as one; forever entwined in each other’s salvation

Hate claims the world

Say the Demons name

What would you say if I was secretly a demon scheming against your life? -Loved One

Tremble in fear to your almighty lord, Death. Shall he claim your soul and pity your body. You are but a mere speck of nothingness.

I will cleanse this world of all evil
-Attempted Kira

O pitiful shadow, lost in the darkness
Bringing torment and pain to others
O damned soul wallowing in your sin
Perhaps, it is time to die
-Jigoku Shoujo

In the name of God, impure souls of the living dead shall banish into eternal damnation. Amen
-Hellsing Prayer

A friend is someone you will die with, to tell your every last deepest sinful desire and secrets; the other part of your soul, who you will literally die without. I have no friends.

No one is worth your love

 

Think beyond your puny imagination of darkness and torment

Don't f**k life, f**k the people

To a greater presence, we are mere subjects and beings. There to live and die and make no effort in your lives.

I will not follow your imagined religion for the sake of my actual living being

 

When one is at the peak of darkness, all will fall

 

Dangerous Pleasure and Blissful Sin

We will be rewarded from our dark deeds with the lust of Satan's death veil.

Light is the new dark

Rage in the meat

 

Animals can present good gore shows. They continue to struggle and agonize until their useless soul is vanquished

 

Don't love, just f**k
-Humans

We humans are disgraces to the word life.

We all don't live long, so don't try

Human gore is a beauty to view, with all the bloodshed, varieties, and hatred; yet all the same, and a pity for words to see.

F**k everyone else, it's Me, Myself and I.

Never trust another soul.

Author's Note

BTW, I'm not crazy or on any pills or depressed or anything. Sometimes my mind just wonders and since I like horror so much I tend to write these things down. The list built on after a while so I decided to post it. Enjoy and don't take it so harshly, I am a pessimist.

Reviews

[Vria P Crow]

INTRODUCTION

1. To be honest, the color scheme was a little distracting. :( However, I'll push on through since I am a fellow horror writer.

QUOTE DISSECTION

1. "You can't see the stars without darkness"

I concur. Dusk is much more appropriate for a writer.

2. "We shall all die"

Indeed we do.
However, there is a Poetic Oasis just for you; it is a Poet's haven for escapism.

3. "I want darkness to thrive on inside, yet not waste this possible one chance of pure life"

You sound like a beautiful Raven to me. Do you by any chance read Edgar Allan Poe or H.P. Lovecraft?

Darkness and Light are intertwined...You cannot have one without the other.

4. "How will Religious people feel when they finally see there is no God"

Oh I see. Remember there is the i n s t i t u t i o n and f a i t h. I, myself am a little bit of pessimist at times. Try Idealistic Realism :)

5. "Don't f**k life, f**k the people"

Let that anger out, my little demon ;)

6. "Don't love, just f**k
-Humans"

I make love to my humans since I choose to be mortal :) What I mean by this is that I came to terms with it.

7. "Don't trust another soul."

Trust souls that are kindred;
kin dred.

Sin cerly,
Ria

p.s. I was on Abilify and it made me psychotic.
p.s.s. I was on Zoloft and it made me happy.
p.s.s.s. The term "crazy" is a relative term.
p.s.s.s.s. "The world is indeed comic, but the joke is on mankind."
H. P. Lovecraft

SUGGESTION: Change it to black since black suits the color scheme. :)

2.

[Blissful Sin]

Sorry about the color x) I just want it to uplift you in a certain way so that one doesn't get too depressed. I just also wanted to take note that I don't think these things all the time, it's just a little comment or thought I think that suits a situation that I was in.
I am sorry if I insulted your religion (I've been reading more about Jesus Christ and Satan to get a feel about which is better for me, or if I should just find a different religion), but it's not like I was trying to encourage any part of it. It's your heart you love what it's says to love!
But I am glad that you shared this with me, it's the first time someone has actually encouraged me to write more instead of saying nasty comments! X)
Thank you for reading!!
-Joyful Bliss

[Vria P Crow]

Awe :( haha I'm Agnostic and was not offended by religion at all! In fact, I'm more of a Spiritualist if anything.

I do not condone nasty comments! I encourage raw emotion through the ocean. I would highly recommend "Blood of Denial" for you since it is about rage on my profile. ;) Honestly, I think you will find it hilarious.

You are very welcome!

I enjoyed this poem very much. I only give suggestions since you as the writer have the ability to choose. Color clears depression, but learn to use it wisely. I do color poetry and photography with it so I've pretty much mastered it. ;) Happy writing, my Joyful Bliss!

[Muse]

I was entertained by some of the oxy-morons in this writing, for example:

How will Religious people feel when they finally see there is no God
The horns of Satan shall penetrate your soul


can we really acknowledge a Satan without believing in God??

I was amused by your prose...good work sweetie...dark but clever.

[Blissful Sin]

I'm glad that you enjoyed...
I have also realized that there are some oxy-morons phrases and thoughts in here.. sorry x)

-Contradicting Bliss

[Lydia Shutter]

While there were parts of this write that made me crings, this one particular line, "You can't see the stars without darkness " is a profound one and stood out for me....like a star in the night sky! Not sure it is wise to never trust another person, but it is wise to be wary and a bit of cynicism is actually healhty. Your writing is definitely intense. Lydi*

[Blissful Sin]

Thank you for your honest comment, I appreciate it a lot!
Its just more of a me thing...
Come back soon!

-Bliss

[Jay]

Well, Yeah, I really like the ending :) I am a christian though lol But I am still very confused on my religion. But I respect your opinions :) And yeah, I just really really love the part when you say " F**k everyone else, it's me, myself and I. Never trust another soul" Thats my fvorite part

[Blissful Sin]

Thank you very much for reading. I'm glad you enjoyed!

-Bliss

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

I have to agree with Ria, the color was a bit distracting to the read...with that said, the concept shone through quite brightly. Your imagery was dark, but it was also quite ethereal in parts, which gave me a sense of surrealism. I was oddly reminded of Alice In Wonderland...not the Disney version, but the strange, morbid and morose original.

Dangerous pleasure and blissful sin -- just one of the many great juxtaposed images/concepts that you infused throughout this piece. I like the juxtaposition, because it give nice movement to the piece in general. Overall, I find this nicely done.

[Blissful Sin]

Thanks a lot for your input, I'm glad that you felt the emotions that came from it! I'll fix the colors tomorrow since I'm getting notice from it.
-Bliss