A life for a life

A life for a life

A Poem by Madara Uchiha
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my belief of equivolent exchage.

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An exchange comes in many ways to living, but never in the same way.  A person has a beutiful body, but has a low IQ, this is a form of equivolent exchange.  A form that do's not fallow this rule let alone no rule's beside give and recieve so no matter what you do you will never know what the exchage will be you can do good stuff and bad stuff happen, you can do bad stuff and good stuff will happen.  Instead of the way Karma works, you do good, good stuff happens, you do bad, badstuff happens.   The logic that it uses is never true.  But one law allways is true a lif for a life, one cannot live witout taking a life, one can't die without damageing a life, can't take a life without giving your life, and can't be born without taking a life. A life for a life is a law of equivolant exchange it cant be changed.

© 2009 Madara Uchiha


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Why can one not live without taking a life? And what exactly constitutes a life in this case??

Posted 14 Years Ago


The format... I'm not a poet but... can we write poems like that (In that format, i mean)?

But, the write is powerful. ^^

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Madara Uchiha

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i'm Jesse i love anime, my fav. char. are Hughs from FMA. Tobi and Kiba from Naruto. Kisuke Urahara fom bleach, Morinozuka Takashi from Ouran high school host club. and some others. i also like devil .. more..

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