I Tried To Tell You I Love You

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I tried to tell you I love you

You didn't listen

 

I tried to tell you I love you

You didn't hear

 

I tried to tell you I love you

You ignored me

 

I tried to tell you I love you

You weren't there

 

I tried to tell you I love you

It's not my fault you left me when I did

 

 

Reviews

[Dearantlers]

that's a really good poem! Thanks so much for the read request!

[Sweets]

Great write!
Your point is clear in here :)
Good job!

[Que]

Great poem, it's very straight to the point but delivers a strong message.
Really enjoyed it.
Cheers and have a good day.

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the repetition in this poem. Made your point loud and clear. When we wait too long. Can miss opportunity to tell someone you love them and need them. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[JanieB]

Very good. Short and to the point. I like the way you have highlighted "I love you", gives it more emphasis.

[BluBubbles]

@ alley
it wasn't all at different times
i though you would know that...
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[alley]

Maybe he thought it was annoying..

[A.E. Surdam]

Sad, unrequited love is always the hardest to deal with in romance. I have known this feeling before. But maybe when we think we are in love with someone and they do not return the feeling there is someone better out there who would love us more than we could imagine. I have enjoyed reading this wonderful little poem.