Crush

The way you look and say my name
is enchanting as secret gardens,
sparkling as your smile,
and beautiful as the sunset

My heart always beats fast
my blood boils, and I totally feel
butterflies fly inside my veins
whenever you're near me

I adore you, for everything you are
but I'm scared to tell you all I feel
'cause I know, I'm not the type
of girl for someone like you

I hope someday I'll have the guts
to tell you how I feel
but still scared, you might turn away
'cause you're my best friend

Reviews

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Very emotional piece.
So much feeling and unanswered questions in this piece.
Though i think things like this should just be said and put out there. better to know then never to know.
My opinion :)
Had my own experience of being in love with my best friend. he didn't feel the same but we got past it still close as ever.
Awesome honest, and wonderful poem.
Keep writing :)

[shyla]

Beautifully spoken :) Your words leave me dreaming of a time i would love to hate thank you

[Coyote Poetry]

Gentle, beautiful and worthwhile words.
"I adore you, for everything you are
but I'm scared to tell you all I feel
'cause I know, I'm not the type
of girl for someone like you"
The above lines. Perfect description for the emotion of love. Thank you Christian for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Hebe]

I enjoyed the simplicity of this write .... very innocent feelings expressed.

[Christian Bonoan]

Thank you Hebe! :)

[B]

Pretty sweeet
That fear at the beginning is so hard to overcome

[Valentine]

Well, I married my best friend and had years of happiness until God called him home. Valentine

[wordman]

you are as good as any one ,and i`m sure your best friend would be thrilled to know how you feel