Maybe You're Right

Maybe You're Right

A Poem by Christian Bonoan

I remember the moment 
 you caressed my cheeks 
 and that moment I realized 
 I wanted that in my life 

I showed you all of me 
 you showed what I want 
 but somehow you've gone cold 
 and left me all alone 

You said it's my fault 
 maybe you're right 
 I wish I changed all of me
 'cause now I just lost myself

© 2017 Christian Bonoan



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The toughest lessons life teaches you and you long to be the same as you were once before. However, time flies and we can never touch the same water running down the river.

Posted 6 Months Ago


Pretty good poem, but do not change yourself , just be your unique self 😊

Posted 6 Months Ago


A lover is a very influential person. You can give your all to them and they can tear it apart in their coldness. Thank you for sharing this.

Posted 6 Months Ago


he touched your heart and you showed him yours,
but it wasn`t real

Posted 6 Months Ago


A sad journey and lesson in the words.
"I showed you all of me
you showed what I want
but somehow you've gone cold
and left me all alone "
I do understand the above words. 15 years in the Army. When you return. Nothing stays the same. Thank you Christian for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 6 Months Ago



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Added on May 31, 2017
Last Updated on May 31, 2017
Tags: Love, Poetry, Stay, Pain, Moments, Remember

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Christian Bonoan
Christian Bonoan

Tarlac, Philippines



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