I Miss You

I Miss You

A Poem by Christian Bonoan

I miss your hug, your touch,    
   the way you look at my eyes,    
   your lips, the way it tastes,    
   and everything about you  

I missed all the times    
   we walked around carnivals    
   we had fun and just laughed    
   you kissed me as I blushed  

Now that you're gone    
   I walked places alone    
   waking up with no one    
   and needing you so bad  

I feel you're forgetting me,    
   all the memories the we built,    
   slowly, just like how you breathe    
   whenever you're asleep  

I hope that you still know    
   how much I love all of you    
   sinking is all I'm feeling    
   it's hard when I miss you 

© 2017 Christian Bonoan



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Just as love and breakup are parts of a relationship similarly missing someone counts as a significant portion for expressing your love. No doubt your poem expresses the emotions beautifully.

Posted 3 Months Ago


Memories and need. Become a part of us. I liked the thoughts and the honest tone of the poetry. Thank you Christian for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 3 Months Ago


This poem exudes passion, and it's beautiful. We never want to miss that one person so much, and we never want to forget better times...it's almost tragic how time plays us for fools. Well-penned.

Posted 4 Months Ago


when you miss the one you love and you feel left out,just remember he probably feels the same

Posted 4 Months Ago


Double check your verb tense here. Your first stanza has "I miss you" and your second has " I missed all the times". The first is present tense and the second is past. It's an easy fix. Also, I think you meant "all the memories that we built". It's a good write that conveys some great emotion, but it will flow better with some clean up.

Posted 4 Months Ago


Perfect in it's way. The pain of missing someone is shown up well...I liked it..:)

Posted 4 Months Ago



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Added on June 16, 2017
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Christian Bonoan
Christian Bonoan

Tarlac, Philippines



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