A Poem by Christian Bonoan

For some reason I’m still hoping 
 for you to come home to me 
 for my heart to keep on beating 
 Oh I hope that you will see 
 my heart crying and bleeding 
 flooding my mind so slowly 
 with thoughts so depressing 
 and they’re killing me softly 
 like the clouds slowly fading 

I hope that you will say 
 the word that you will stay 
 stay, and never go away 
 because I will always stay 
 to you since you’re my prayer 
 for us to be so gay 
 with dreams that meant to say 
 “Forever”, as I pray 
 all these, I hope, someday.

© 2017 Christian Bonoan

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Poem rhymes well. Good job Christian. It truly touched my heart- wanting & praying someone you love to stay is an emotion that is quite difficult to express but you've done it so well.

Posted 1 Year Ago

The need and want for someone to stay can be so powerful and heart breaking. I felt those emotions coming through strong and clear in this piece

Posted 1 Year Ago

this poem speaks to me on so many different levels, being left behind by someone you care about is a touchy subject and i'm glad you wrote about it. very nice work. :)

Posted 1 Year Ago

a touching write,almost universal,it touches a lot of people

Posted 1 Year Ago

Sometime hope and a prayer is all we have. Thank you Christian for sharing the amazing poetry.

Posted 1 Year Ago

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Added on July 7, 2017
Last Updated on July 7, 2017
Tags: Love, Poetry, Stay, Please. Forgive, Word


Christian Bonoan
Christian Bonoan

Tarlac, Philippines

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