A Poem by Christian Bonoan

For some reason I’m still hoping 
 for you to come home to me 
 for my heart to keep on beating 
 Oh I hope that you will see 
 my heart crying and bleeding 
 flooding my mind so slowly 
 with thoughts so depressing 
 and they’re killing me softly 
 like the clouds slowly fading 

I hope that you will say 
 the word that you will stay 
 stay, and never go away 
 because I will always stay 
 to you since you’re my prayer 
 for us to be so gay 
 with dreams that meant to say 
 “Forever”, as I pray 
 all these, I hope, someday.

© 2017 Christian Bonoan

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Poem rhymes well. Good job Christian. It truly touched my heart- wanting & praying someone you love to stay is an emotion that is quite difficult to express but you've done it so well.

Posted 11 Months Ago

The need and want for someone to stay can be so powerful and heart breaking. I felt those emotions coming through strong and clear in this piece

Posted 11 Months Ago

this poem speaks to me on so many different levels, being left behind by someone you care about is a touchy subject and i'm glad you wrote about it. very nice work. :)

Posted 11 Months Ago

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a touching write,almost universal,it touches a lot of people

Posted 11 Months Ago

Sometime hope and a prayer is all we have. Thank you Christian for sharing the amazing poetry.

Posted 11 Months Ago

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5 Reviews
Added on July 7, 2017
Last Updated on July 7, 2017
Tags: Love, Poetry, Stay, Please. Forgive, Word


Christian Bonoan
Christian Bonoan

Tarlac, Philippines

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