Damn

The pain of Love

Crushing terror,
eyes on fire.

Searing pain like stabbing knives

Who knew that love could hurt.

Could hurt so much.

Reviews

[Tim]

Nicely described without having to go into anything drawn out. You've used the chosen words wisely.

[deeps]

Such emotion in this write

[Samuel Dickens]

Yes, it hurts more than about anything I can think of. On the other hand, it also feels better than about anything I can think of.

[tbwdtw]

I really like this. There is so much emotion in so little words.

[Coyote Poetry]

Yes when love fall away from us. Pain can overtake us. A powerful short poem. You wrote a complete poem in so few words. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[RosylnPeaches]

Thank you

[Soul Magic✯]

a few words can speak volume in this piece. it's sad to see anyone go through this pain. outstanding expressing of words