End of this

I walk

Walk

Walk

And walk

 

You just talk

Talk

Talk

And talk

 

I cry,

Cry

Cry

And cry

 

As you still lie

Lie

Lie

And lie

 

I wish

Wish

Wish

And wish

 

That this is the end of this...

Reviews

[£15 + A S**t BJ]

this is not my cup of cocoa :( only joking, well cool...

[Michael Mwachofi]

I like the fluidity of the few words used.

The repetition did it well. Nice:)

~M.Babu~

[SpokenWord]

It is cute really and not bad for five minutes on a quick thought.

[Chris Smith Welshpoetcs]

I like the lyrical flow.

[FaithfullyJennyBear]

this is quite good, short, repetitive and rather awesome, great write :)