Lets confess

This is a confession,

Which leads me to my depression,

My heart is so empty,

No love to surround me.

 

Things never work out,

Im not stupid to ever believe,

That happiness will be here,

Content with me.

 

Forgive and forget,

Make new friends,

New times begin,

All the hate ends.

 

But when something begins,

And you can't explain,

Don't know what to do or say,

In the end there will be pain.

 

Life is no fairytale,

No bittersweet dream,

Its full of emotions and memories,

Ripping at the seams.

 

I want things to be good for once,

My life to be fine,

But usual of me,

I've fucked it up,

I put my heart on the line.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A wise person know when to hold on and when to run. Love is a test. Best to know the people you want to get close to. Many people will hit and run leaving you abused and pissed off. When you put the heart on the line. Insure the other person want the same. I like the desire and the story in the poem. Thank you for a excellent poem.
Coyote

[ecept]

such a powerful read and so emotional. well expressed!

[Aidz]

Quite enjoyed this, a nice beat and feel... well done

[Michael Mwachofi]

This was a brilliant ending...
It was like you were leading me up on a path in one direction, building up steadily then at the last second you ripped it from under me with a great ending.

Emotive read my friend...

~M.Babu~

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

You captured the feelings and truth really good in this write, i loved it from beginning to end, the lines i loved are the first two, nice rhyming, and nicely written n said.

[Linear]

Well reasoned, well rhymed, we all get hurt sometime dont we, it's what makes us what we are, and the bonus is it helps us write :O}