Thanks

Thanks for hurting me.

Thanks for thinking I won't care.

Thanks for making me feel worse.

Thanks for the stuff you couldn't share.

 

Thanks for making me feel bad.

Thanks for days I was oblivious.

Thanks for making me feel sad,

When I found out about all this.

 

I guess we are totally different.

I dont understand how.

My life is full of your problems.

Im drowing but I can't reach out,

I can't reach out to save myself.

 

I don't expect anyone to be the same as me.

I guess Im just not that lucky.

I always am the second choice,

The one after you.

But sometimes I just wanna drop it all.

Scream and f*****g shout.

Go to the people who I wanna be with.

Leave you the f**k out.

Reviews

[John Patrick Robbins AK..]

Hell of a closing line once was strong and rage filled once always works
sorry i havent read your work sooner cause honestly your a heck of a read people can break us at times but for writers what they dont seem to get is it's just fuel for the fire cheers
Gonzo

[BigDaddySiddle]

@£15 + A S**t BJ
you proper genk flannel, only said that for the wc points to add to your tally !?;'^",

[£15 + A S**t BJ]

hope you're okay hannah, i'm here if you need me xxxx

[FaithfullyJennyBear]

:'(

[Coyote Poetry]

Good to write down anger. Allow the anger to be release to a sheet of paper. You answer your questions in the end.
"Go to the people who I wanna be with.
Leave you the f**k out. "
Thank you for a powerful poem.
Coyote