Baby

Wrote it a few week ago :3

I'd never of thought that I'd say this to you,

I've fallen for a friend and it's true,

I can't stand not to be near,

Your beautiful laugh is what I want to hear,

The time with you is a dream come true,

Babygirl, I think I'm in love with you.

Reviews

[Jayren]

For it's lenght it's very exciting, I can feel the sheer attachment within the 6 lines.... Godd job

[LiberatedBeing]

Curt, to the point, caring without being overly sentimental. Nice.

[Divinity Sleeps in This]

That's exactly how I feel.

[Dawn]

that is really awsome!

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