Autumn

Autumn

A Poem by Carmen L.

Autumn is that pause

the one which makes everything seem to float

The pause is felt in the breeze

which runs cool against your skin

Autumn’s pause is that pause

which is not seen by the human eye

but it’s there

that inhaled breath

just before the first leaf of autumn

floats

to

the

ground.


© 2011 Carmen L.



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I liked it very much because this is my favourite genre of poetry and you have expressed it all very nicely.

Posted 6 Years Ago


just before the first leaf of autumn
floats
to
the
ground.

paint an animated image in my mind of what this line beautifully described. :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


This is a really beautiful write.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Truly beautiful with a wonderful form.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on August 16, 2011
Last Updated on August 19, 2011
Tags: autumn, nature, pause

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Carmen L.
Carmen L.

Cape Town, South Africa



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Sometimes words cannot describe how I feel. Love, hate and fear all jumbled in one. But when I can put my feelings into words, I do. I am not an accomplished writer and good pieces are few and fa.. more..

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