My Own Personal Hell

it pretty much displays a love hate relationship in its most hardcore to the bone way

Knock all the wind out of me
knock me down beat me up
cut me up stop my breathing
close my eyes and say im dead
heavens waiting....
hells closer...
a blinding light
a dark hole
welcoming arms
and still a dark abyss
one to choose
one to discard
i choose neither
instead i stand in limbo
waiting....
waiting for the day you die
i wait not with a vengence
but with warm arms and an open heart
and when you arrive we stand face to face
i say "I love you"
you say "f**k off"
rip my heart out and cut it into pieces
with the same blade you used to kill me
i saw you when i died when my soul left my body
with tears in your eyes and a hole in your heart
you walk into the abyss leaving me motionless
eternally dead in all forms of reality
so with my arms still open
and the remains of my heart on the floor
i stay for eternity
My own personal hell....

Reviews

[J.M]

Wow - intense. This is an extremely vivid and passionate poem, whilst also being very dramatic. It has made something violent and grim, into something beautiful and flowing. Nice work!