Bri

Bri

A Poem by Jordan Avechuco
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A Poem for my girlfriend

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Your smile is unbearably beautiful,
you brighten the dark of any situation.
Your beauty,
Indescribable.
I love the way you make me smile, 
I love the way i feel when i'm around you.
Happy, 
Alive,
Thankful.
How could i have not seen it earlier?
You are who i truly want,
so much time wasted,
so much pain endured.
But i honestly can't complain,
because it made me see that.....
You are the one for me.
Though it may scare me that i almost never know what your thinking or how you feel
I can only hope you feel the same about me.
and so this ode goes to you,
Briana Koetzle
I Love You

© 2010 Jordan Avechuco



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The unpredictable rhythm of this poem reminded me of the surprise and roller coaster of love itself. This is very sensitive and sweet. Briana Koetzle is a lucky girl.

Posted 3 Years Ago


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Added on May 16, 2010
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Jordan Avechuco
Jordan Avechuco

Mesa, AZ



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Not the person i appear to be at first I write from boredom ususally but there are some that have string emotional ties to them. Enjoy. more..

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