A Child's View

A Child's View

A Poem by Mark Witterick

I would join you, but I am trapped. 
I seek to follow you, yet I am halted.

You pass it with ease, I am stuck.
Tears fall, for now I am sad.
Mother appears nature transformed.

My path now open to catch you I am reaching.
I move onwards forever falling but now free.

© 2016 Mark Witterick

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Lovely, is the child maybe free momentarily before the next trap, aka''forever falling''?

Posted 1 Year Ago

Mark Witterick

1 Year Ago

The poem was a response to this prompt. If it helps at all.
https://ap-pics2.gotpoem.com/ap-p.. read more
Nia Lisa

1 Year Ago

Yes, I see how that prompt would inspire this poem!

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Added on June 1, 2016
Last Updated on June 2, 2016


Mark Witterick
Mark Witterick

United Kingdom

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