Missing

Hope you enjoy it!

 

Twilight entrances

Dark waters enthrawl

Calling us to its depths

Spectral winds howl

Lonely in the dark

Calling for what is theirs

But what was theirs was lost

Never to be seen again

Reviews

[afra]

short but deep .....good job skye

[Skye]

Thanks. :)

[TC Dunn]

short and sweet. Very dark, but I like it. Very nice imagery.

[Wolfhilde]

Short but powerfull. I like it a lot! It is dark and sweet the same time.

[Mehul Rwat]

Lovely words, lovely write.. Short but good choice for word combination..

[MOON]

lovely flow , scary write.

[humahum]

I really enjoyed this write, i found such depth in your words. Intriguing as well.

[Aeternal Oceanfire]

Cooll and mysterious. These words work a deep magic.

[JustLorry]

i do like this, very much. no change required. you make your point wonderfully and yet keep some mystery to it too. Great job.

[Renée J. Martin]

Oh I do like this ! .. mysterious, edge of dark.. although I have a hard time writing.. simplicity is always a favorite of mine !