Lingering Spirits

I seriously think I'm being haunted. So yeah. :)

 

 

Strange noises

Paired with curious acts

Leave me questioning

What I once disregarded

I thought it was over

That it had all passed

But somethings lingered

Stuck to my side

At night my terrors

Seem too real

And I almost believe

What I had once Rejected

Reviews

[Lina Grey]

ooh, ghosts. I think it's a ghost. I don't think you're insane.. a great write ~em

[Skye]

Lol well the poem seemeed to have scared whatever it was off,thank goodness :) thanks for reveiwing!

[Lina Grey]

well that's good :) your welcome ~em

[lynn]

Very nice, dear poet :)

[Skye]

Thanks :)

[Dean Kuch®]

Writing is certainly an excellent way to extract our inner demons, expose them in the light for all to see, and expel them upon the written page. I think you've done this with a flair! Majestic... (and magnetic) read...!

[Skye]

Thanks so much! I'm glad you liked it.
............. I have to say, I love this add comment thing. :D

[Dean Kuch®]

Me too! Great added feature to an already great site...

[Skye]

Its the only site I actually get on, the others are just.....I don't know, I just don't liket them as much.

[Dean Kuch®]

I tried another one recommended by a friend of mine. I won't mention the name, but it begins with the letter'W'. Too many self absorbed, pandering individuals there for my taste...

[Skye]

Lol, I know what you mean. I also like that this site isn't just teenagers, as most are. I know that that's a stupid thing to say, since I am one, its just... there were to many fan fictions and things of the like.

[Serenity Faith]

Your Author's Note made me giggle, I thought I'd point that out first. Secondly an intriguing way to describe what cannot be described. Very well written.

[Skye]

Thanks! Actually, what I had intended to do worked. As soon as I posted this poem, I haven't had any more problems. :)

[Lina Grey]

I get the same way sometimes...well, almost all the time. I'm trying to convince myself it's all in my head, with little success. Hope your "friends" learn to leave you alone. This is a very descriptive poem. Thank you.

[Aeternal Oceanfire]

Quite thought provoking, that last line. Great write!

[icaros13]

Nice write. Try leaving them a sweet treat, like cookies or cake. I have some mischievious "friends" that love to turn on my television in the middle of the night, or turn my oven off when I turn my back while cooking...

[JustLorry]

i did enjoy it, but hope your just a scratcher when you sleep. Try telling them nice things, like you arent their to hurt them and who they are looking for has gone. My sister talks about this all the time.