Reality

This is not about an actual woman...possibly.....more of a conceptualized idea!

Reality (November 2010)

Uneventful days pass away

And I question existence 

With nothing to say.

For words can't exchange 

Breath with eternity's lips

And soliloquies shan't dare

Caress reality's dainty hips.

I experience existence 

As a fleeting woman;

Seductively succulent eyes

Turning most mortals blind

Begging me, silently, 

To stay for just a while and

Breathe light into darkness

As I spread my creator's gift

Directly from my lover's lips;

Ambrosia covered bliss 

That brings esse into the fade.

Then she suddenly walks away

With not a word to say.

Oh, my gorgeous love,

Fickle and wanton knave.

Let me be, sweet reality 

For I no longer want a taste.

Reviews

[MuSe Ampoule]

Love the imagery here. Very well constructed.
"Caress reality's dainty hips.
I experience existence
As a fleeting woman;"

[Champagne]

'Let me be, sweet reality
For I no longer want a taste.'

Very nice ending. The opening lines are great too. Well done.

[.]

a creative sensual dip..

[SpokenWord]

Very sensually put with an ending of wanting more than a taste. Your words are easily read and the flow is just poetic. Writing about any woman to me should be sensually romantic and leave us readers desiring more. Excellent good read of your work for me.

[LiveLaughLove]

love it.
you sure do love writing about women.lol

[Misty Blue Eyes]

this is quite the poem... i love it Light

[Shelly Braen]

I love it. "Ambrosia covered bliss" So warm and delicate, yet pungent is that line. I believe that has to be one of the most tasteful lines I have ever heard. It brings back the magic of sensuality and gives it a delectable flavor. Bravo!

[Nobody.]

Interesting read. I like the lines
"ambrosia covered bliss
that brings esse into the fade"
fresh language, nice imagery and a good flow.

I enjoyed.
Cheers!

[Sugar Plum ♥]

yes, that poem had a special taste of unreal "reality" and something more....I loved "Breath with eternity`s lips",
Begging me silently,
to stay for just a while and
Breathe light into darkness
As a spread my creators gift
Directly from my lovers lips..."

[Inkcognito]

A totally yummy read with a most seductive, rhythmic flow and tantalizing imagery so generously painted - hmmm...life and love - much like a delicious dream of a distant lover's teasing touch...until reality bites - hard!!
A brilliant piece - I truly enjoyed the read