Beams of Light

...this one, i'm really confused about...so yea

July 2011

Transfixed on beams 
Of solid light,
I tightrope the 
Exspanse between
God and children.
Teetering between
Chaos, order
Fear and reason,
I cast shadows
Over vast pools of
Shallow humanity
Drowning the blind 
In blackened seas
Ressurecting
All to new life.
The blessed baptism
Of glorious light.

Reviews

[Priscilla Sayers]

O! Glorious light, I love the optimism, the absolute beauty in your words as you do bring upon us a new light showing such strength! Stunning!

[Sugar Plum ♥]

Amazing , great, wonderful! I feel attached to your poems, all including fantasy and philosophy details and much deep sense...I like the way you write and style so simple and clear and clean!!! you are great! just that...
~nia~

[R J Askew]

Great stuff, great subject. I had to read it when I saw the title. Tis my kinda subject. I took a pic with my camera in a pan, literally and was surprised to get a pic similar to the one you have with your poem here. you will find the pic on about page 2 or 3 of my web site rjaskew.com ... it is literally a flash in a pan, though you wld not realise it from looking at it, but it is. I think your line about teetering between chaos and order is at the heart of it. Where are we without light? maybe the dark equates to chaos. but then without the dark would light be visible to us? The two light and dark, chaos and order both seem part of the same state. Your following lines about vast pools has a feel of William Blake's visionary charisma about it. Maybe your poem is one to be felt and understood on a level other than in the intellect. Might that account for your stated confusion?

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amen..gloriously perceptive..

[Lilly Negoi]

very very nice :). i love the self-portrait here :).