A vibrant electric blue bird.

Sitting thinking about all of my negativity as most do, I was reminded that life is a beautiful thing. Do not waste it.

In a world full of void.
A vibrant bird the color of the a perfect spring day graced me with her enchanting melody.
Seemingly uplifting me from this relentless sinking feeling that my life has trapped me firmly under.
She gently floats along on the breeze, softly yet rhythmically moving in perfect harmony with her song as if floating on a calm ocean current
As she passed by she immediately caught my tired emerald colored eyes.
As she flew away she carried my sorrows on the tips of her vibrant feathers.

Author's Note

I just thought I'd share.

Reviews

[H L Rose]

This reminds me of when I overheard a little boy talking about the importance of a penny. Even the little things have significance. I wish I could offer some constructive criticism, but I don’t think I have any.
It conjures up a beautiful image in my mind, and I’ve thoroughly enjoyed reading it!

[Bmmed94]

Thank you for caring enough to share your thoughts. This couldn't have come at a better time. Im currently having a writers block. These good vibes will carry over. Thank you Hannah.

[H L Rose]

Glad I could be of help!

[Rene Velez]

Good imagery, good rhythm. Fine write.

[Jennesis]

Nature has a way of doing this for us. The imagery here is beautiful and relatable. Keep up the good work

[wordman]

wonderful thoughts,a blue bird is very pretty ,and her song even more
and if we can cover our troubles for a while,why not

[Raven Goodpaster]

This is an extremely gorgeous poem.

[Bmmed94]

Thanks a million.

[JLily98]

It's beautiful. I do think the structure could be improved, but that's just my opinion. Otherwise it was a very nice read!