Wanting more than friendship

I feel that many people can relate to this poem, we have all had friendships where our feelings get stronger and we want it to be more, sometimes it works but like this poem it doesn't

I want to hold you tight at night

feel your skin and smell your hair

I know you would complete me

But you are never there

I wish one day, no more a friend

But a lover, a soul mate, my bride to be

It seems so joyful when I pretend

That you are with me, Together at last

Our own little house having a blast

Why cant you see, what your doing to me

Not even a chance even when I glance

My hope turned to sorrow as he moved in

He stole your heart

and now we have to part

It may be hard to see my view

But I was waiting in the queue

Hoping, dreaming, wishing

For a little chance with you

Reviews

[{A}shley {B}lack @-;-]

I agree we can all relate at some point in our lives we have had feelings which weren't mirrored by the person we were interested in

A good write although some rhymes felt forced to keep the flow going but sometimes when you have a good poem its not always about the rhyming