What Can I Do?

What Can I Do?

A Chapter by Lino Rie
"

A song that popped in my head one day.

"
I feel a boundary
 between us.
I feel it closing in.
My memories
of us now
is fading a way
like the snow in may aaaa a.
(chorus) What Can I dooo ooh ohohoh.
What can I do to help you ow.
I don't know what to do.
But I want to help
so let me through.
I want to help you.
( repet)

What am I to you ow?
A friend or foe,
is it me you know.
  Why don't you 
let me through to ow you.
I want to stay friends
but the fighting never ends.
The fighting never ends.
(chorus) 
We should be marry
but nothings the way
we want it to stay aaaa a.
But baby it's ok
to be the way 
you are today.
( the word day echoes)
(chorus)
So I guess it's over 
our friendship won't 
be the same.
Our lives are over
we'll never begin again.
So now we're over, 
what are you going to say?


© 2013 Lino Rie


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a wonderful song :))

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lino Rie

11 Years Ago

Thank you.
I think it would be really awesome to hear this sung (: but this is beautiful, great job!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lino Rie

11 Years Ago

I would sing it for you guys but I don't know if you guys would like just lyrics.
Amandaaa Caroline (:

11 Years Ago

Oh okay, gotcha. Well anyways, great song, whether it ever gets sung or not (:
Lino Rie

11 Years Ago

Thanks
I would like to hear this with music! :) Nice song!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lino Rie

11 Years Ago

Thank you.:) If I know how to play my Guitar and piano then I could make the music for you guys.

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Lino Rie
Lino Rie

Williams, MN



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